7.20.2010

insomnia...

provocative sans arrogance
handsome and confident
thoughts of you leave me restless

passion spirals outta control
once clenched by anguish
yet eternally secure with your manipulation of my heart
unlocked by the cadence of sweet intensity

you revived my desire
lying there in a deep slumber
quietly I watch your chest rise breath after breath
beckoning my lips to softly kiss…nibble…lick, I refrain

inhaling an invisible elixir of rejuvenation
exhaling the stress of a life well lived
a deep slumber only a brief respite

embracing the pillow with the security of that of my bosom
i wonder what your waking thought will be
will you crave my femininity

pre-dawn anticipation of passion awakens me
discovering solace in your control
offering a place to invigorate your strength and poise

in your dreams and under your influence i've taken hold
my walls spasm at mere thought of the love you deftly paint them with
stroke after delightful stroke a mélange of love, lust…an unbreakable union

tornado of intensity
just as I’m ready to let go...forever
innate is your way of loving me
enticing me back in like opium to an addict

10 points of view:

  1. DAAAAMMMMN, and a big ole WHOA! Stellar lines, and hella metaphors all up & thru this one! You ROCKED this piece, ma!

    I especially dug this line:

    "unlocked by the cadence of sweet intensity"

    Wow! That's both mad visual and deeply poetic!

    BTW: Please STOP writing poems about ME!!! LOL.

    SJ!

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  2. Wow! You're so good! Love this..
    The feelings described, I could almost feel it
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  3. Come on Moanicomplicity, you ain't slick, stop hitting on my girl.

    Thanks Miss Curvy, I'll see you after work, and then we can continue this dialog :-)
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  4. "inhaling an invisible elixir of rejuvenation"

    Wow...go head with yo bad self. I like poems that take you on a mental journey.
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  5. @She's Savvy ~ Hey lady! Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked it.

    @Moanerplicity ~ ROFL! Good thing I didn't dedicate it to "my special friend" like I started to. I appreciate ya :-)!

    @2cute4u, Miz and Kandia ~ Thanks ladies! Amazing what a little restless night will make ya think of...lol

    @Carey ~ Can't tell you nothin'! LOL
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  6. This is a hot piece! I completely agree with Lin --very well written!
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  7. Girl, you good! But you know this!

    "pre-dawn anticipation of passion awakens me
    discovering solace in your control
    offering a place to invigorate your strength and poise"

    I likes this!!
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  8. @Felicia and Anna Renee ~ Thanks ladies! Just a little daydreaming...lol
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